Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hurrah! You got it! You truly passed the test on your own.
Now, you could focus on your project. You really have to nail it, my friend!
But please take it easy.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
All the best to you and your family, James!
-Klein-
When was the last time you took the plunge?
Relate your experience.
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As you know, I participated in the 6 sigma education for 2 weeks.
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At that time, I took the plunge and decided to study hard that subject. Because I have to get a Master Black Belt(MBB) in the 6 sigma.
>>At that time, I took the plunge and decided to study that subject real/really hard because I have to get a Master Black Belt (MBB) in the 6 sigma.
So I focused on the lecture and I studied hard the subject.
>>So I focused on the lecture and studied the subject hard.
The class was started at 8 AM to 5 PM.
>>The class started at 8 AM until 5 PM.
I went the classroom early and I had checked that day\'s lecture.
>>I went to the classroom early and had checked that day\'s lecture.
And after class, I reviewed the subject.
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Thanks to my effort, I passed the final test on last Friday.
>>Thanks to my effort, I passed the final test last Friday.
As a result of the test, I got a qualification to do a 6 sigma project.
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So, I will do a project using 6 sigma and I will present about it to my boss.
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And then there is an oral test to get a 6 sigma MBB.
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Anyway I have to obtain a MBB qualification to maintain team leader.
>>Anyway, I have to obtain an MBB qualification to maintain my position as a team leader.
That was the reason why I took the plunge and decided to study hard.
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