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I think texting while driving should be illegal.
>> CORRECT
If I text while driving, I can not see well and the probability of a traffic accident increase.
>> If I text while driving, I won\'t see the path well and the probability of a traffic accident will increase.
In addition it is not only the person who caused the traffic accident when it happened is injured.
>> In addition, it can also lead to road traffic crash.
Like this, the behavior is very dangerous to not only one´s own self but also others.
>> That kind of behavior is very dangerous not only to oneself but also to others.
So I think texting while driving should be illegal.
>> So, I think texting while driving should be illegal.
>> OR: In conclusion, texting while driving should be illegal.
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