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2018-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Writing Task: What is the most important holiday in your country? What is your favorite holiday? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. Most important holiday in my country are ChewSuck and SalNal. I like Salnal most. In Salnal,we can recieve the money to my grandparents. And,I like ricecakesoup that eat in Salnal. So,I like the Salnal most.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your favorite Korean holiday and the things you do on that day.^^

>> My most important holidays in my country are Chuseok and Seollal.
I like Salnal most.

>> I like Seollal the most.
In Salnal,we can recieve the money to my grandparents.

>> On Seollal, I can receive money from my grandparents.
And,I like ricecakesoup that eat in Salnal.

>> And I like rice cake soup which we eat on Seollal.
So,I like the Salnal most.

>> So, I like Seollal the most.

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