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Personally, I like laptop better than tablet.
>> CORRECT
Of course, tablet is easier to carry because of light weight. But it doesn’t have keyboard and it is limited in performance.
>> Of course, tablet is easier to carry because it\'s light weight but it doesn’t have a keyboard and its performance is limited.
So it seems like it is not fit to work on.
>> So, it seems like it is not fit to work with.
The decisive reason why I like laptops is they look better.
>> The one decisive reason why I like laptops is they look much better.
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