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2018-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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If you had the opportunity to bring any person from the past or present, fictional or nonfictional to a place that is special to you (your hometown or country, a favorite location, etc.), who would you bring and why? I would like to bring my grand mother from the past. I want to share more time and show herhow I am living. I was raised by my granny. She passed away when I was 15. I want to do many things like traveling, eating delicious food, watching dramas and so on with her.

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Thanks for sharing this MISS [이름]!
Spend a lot of time with the people you love because once they\'re gone, you won\'t be able to do that no matter what you do. Have a great day!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


If you had the opportunity to bring any person from the past or present, fictional or nonfictional to a place that is special to you (your hometown or country, a favorite location, etc.), who would you bring and why?

I would like to bring my grand mother from the past.

>>> I would like to bring my grandmother from the past.
 I want to share more time and show herhow I am living.

>>> I want to spend more time with her and show her how I am living.
 I was raised by my granny.

>>> Correct!

She passed away when I was 15.

>>> Correct!
 I want to do many things like traveling, eating delicious food,
watching dramas and so on with her.

>>> Correct!

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