Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Everyone should adopt vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?
I partly agree with eating vegetables but I think it should be balanced
meat and vegetables. Some people don't want to eat meat so they get
essential nutrients from only vegetables but it is reall hard to control the diet.
강사 첨삭
I hope everything is fine there MISS [이름]!
Thank you once again for this. See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Everyone should adopt vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?
I partly agree with eating vegetables but I think it should be balanced
meat and vegetables.
>>> I partly agree with eating vegetables but I think we should follow a balanced diet.
Some people don\'t want to eat meat so they get
essential nutrients from only vegetables but it is reall hard to control the diet.
>>> Correct! [really]
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