Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
They help us to live in peace.
>> Correct
In detail, They control the traffic so that we can move safely.
>> To be more specific, they control the traffic so that we can move safely.
And also, arrest the offender to protecte the people.
>> They also arrest offenders to protect the people.
Sometimes, they catch a animal thet attack people.
>> Sometimes, they also catch animals to protect people.
When I was 12, I saw the big dog wander around in our village and was caught by the police.
>> When I was 12, I saw a big dog wandering around in our village and was caught by the police.
I was really grateful.
>> I am really grateful for them.
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