homework
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I believe that people must work hard to become successful.Because Many of jobs need work hard.But later, if the science develop,people must no work hard to become successful.
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Hi kelvin,
Thank You for doing your assignment
Keep up the Good work and I know someday
You will be a successful person.
Good Job!
Teacher Brian,
I believe that people must work hard to become successful.
>>I believe that people must work hard to become successful
Because Many of jobs need work hard.
>>because most jobs needs hard work,
But later, if the science develop,people must no work hard to become successful.
>>But nowadays because of technology peoples lives and work are getting much easier compared to the past.
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