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2018-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Please relate your experience where you took the fifth. ==> In my case, I took the fifth when I was in adverse condition. For example, after dinner with my team members, we went to a karaoke and enjoyed our time together. Unfortunately, my wife really hates that I go to a karaoke without her. So when I came back home late after team dinner, I sometimes took the fifth about my team dinner course. Normally I said to my wife I just stayed at the restaurant for a long time in the evening. Nowadays, I came back home early after team dinner because most of my team members live in Daegu. Generally our team dinner finishes before 9:00 PM and we say good bye each other and come back home. So the terms that I take the fifth is rare nowadays.

강사 첨삭

This is so cool!

I just learned more about you and your wife! Awesome!

Thanks for sharing!

Oh, there is another composition. Catch you there!

-Klein-

Please relate your experience where you took the fifth.
 ==>
 In my case, I took the fifth when I was in adverse condition.

 >> Correct
 For example, after dinner with my team members, we went to a karaoke and enjoyed our time together.
 
>> Correct

Unfortunately, my wife really hates that I go to a karaoke without her.
 
>> Correct

So when I came back home late after team dinner, I sometimes took the fifth about my team dinner course.
 
>> So when I came back home late after some team dinner, I sometimes took the fifth about my team dinner course.

Normally I said to my wife I just stayed at the restaurant for a long time in the evening.
 
>> Correct

Nowadays, I came back home early after team dinner because most of my team members live in Daegu. 
>> Nowadays, I come back home early after the team dinner, because most of my team members live in Daegu.

Generally our team dinner finishes before 9:00 PM and we say good bye each other and come back home.
 
>> Generally, our team dinner finishes before 9:00 PM and we say goodbye to each other and come back home.

So the terms that I take the fifth is rare nowadays.

 >> Correct

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