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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
You tell such interesting stories.
I could really imagine the situation between you and your sister.
I hope that you could still get along most of the time.
It\'s nice having a sister.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My last time I got angry was that my sister yells at me to come out frome the toilet.
>> The last time I got angry was when my sister yelled at me to come out of the bathroom.
Well, just a little bit, I can understand her.
>> If she didn\'t yell, then, I would understand her.
When I was stucked in the toilt, it was morning so she was very busy.
>> It was morning that time and she was very busy while I was still in the bathroom.
But there was another toilet except the toilet that I was in!!
>> However, there was another bathroom that she could use.
I knew it so I told her to use another toilet.
>> I knew about it so I told her to use the other bathroom.
But she just shouted, ignoring my word.
>> But she ignored me and continued shouting.
So, I got angry, and yelled at her to use another toilet again.
>> I also got angry and yelled at her to use the other bathroom again.
And what happend next was, she left and used the another toilet.
>> She left and used the other bathroom.
She just didn\'t wanted to walk to the another toilet!!
>> She just didn\'t want to walk to the other bathroom!!
That makes me more angry.
>> That made me angrier.
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