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2018-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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My last time I got angry was that my sister yells at me to come out frome the toilet. Well, just a little bit, I can understand her. When I was stucked in the toilt, it was morning so she was very busy. But there was another toilet except the toilet that I was in!! I knew it so I told her to use another toilet. But she just shouted, ignoring my word. So, I got angry, and yelled at her to use another toilet again. And what happend next was, she left and used the another toilet. She just didn't wanted to walk to the another toilet!! That makes me more angry.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

You tell such interesting stories.

I could really imagine the situation between you and your sister.

I hope that you could still get along most of the time.

It\'s nice having a sister.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

My last time I got angry was that my sister yells at me to come out frome the toilet.
>> The last time I got angry was when my sister yelled at me to come out of the bathroom.
Well, just a little bit, I can understand her.
>> If she didn\'t yell, then, I would understand her.
When I was stucked in the toilt, it was morning so she was very busy.
>> It was morning that time and she was very busy while I was still in the bathroom.
But there was another toilet except the toilet that I was in!!
>> However, there was another bathroom that she could use.
I knew it so I told her to use another toilet.
>> I knew about it so I told her to use the other bathroom.
But she just shouted, ignoring my word.
>> But she ignored me and continued shouting.
So, I got angry, and yelled at her to use another toilet again.
>> I also got angry and yelled at her to use the other bathroom again.
And what happend next was, she left and used the another toilet.
>> She left and used the other bathroom.
She just didn\'t wanted to walk to the another toilet!!
>> She just didn\'t want to walk to the other bathroom!!
That makes me more angry.

>> That made me angrier.

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