Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Should tablets replace textbooks in schools? Explain your answer.
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If we use tablets for long time, they can damage our eyes.
And we need much money to buy them.
But we can protect the trees.
강사 첨삭
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If we use tablets for long time, they can damage our eyes.
>> If we use tablets for a long time, it will damage our eyes.
And we need much money to buy them.
>> They also cost a lot of money.
But we can protect the trees.
>> However, we can protect the trees if we use tablets.
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