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2018-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Writing task: Has climate change affected the country in which you live? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. Yes. Our country affected lots of climate changing. For example, I saw the snowing on April. It was interesting. And,our country season become a subtropical climate. To my experience,the Korea summer is hotter than Philliphiens summer.

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Writing task: Has climate change affected the country in which you live? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
Yes. Our country affected lots of climate changing.

>> Yes. Our country is also affected by climate change.
For example, I saw the snowing on April.

>> For example, it still snowed in April.
It was interesting.

>> Correct.
And,our country season become a subtropical climate.

>> And, our country has subtropical climate.
To my experience,the Korea summer is hotter than Philliphiens summer.

>> Based on my experience, in the summer, Korea is hotter than the Philippines.

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