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You have painted a very interesting picture here.
I hope you would continue doing a good job in your compositions.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, Halloween isn\'t celebrated very big in Korea.
>> Halloween is not that special in Korea.
When Halloween comes, some shops expose some Halloween goods like witch hats, pirate hats, robes...
>> When Halloween comes, some shops offer some Halloween goods like witch hats, pirate hats, robes and so on.
But most of the people just look at them because we don\'t do treat-or trick games.
>> Correct
Well, some schools have a costume party on Halloween, but they do not go out with the basket asking for the candy.
>> Well, some schools have costume parties on Halloween, but they do not go out with baskets asking for candy.
I once had a costume party at school, at it was very fun.
>> I once had a costume party at school and it was very fun.
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