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2018-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When do you think you need to take the bull by the horns? ==> There are many things to overcome when I am team leader. When I have a difficult problem to solve it, I need to take the bull by the horns. Because if I hesitate about that, my team members become more difficult. So I talk many times with my team members and we are trying to find some solution about our problem. It is very difficult thing but, as you know, I am research engineer in our company, so finally we find the solution about our problem. After I solve that problem, I always feel that I did my best and It was good to take the bull by the horns.

강사 첨삭

Hello, James!

I should say [이름] [이름]-A! lol

Did you take the bull by the horns today?

I hope not. I hope you didn\'t have to solve any problems and you had a smooth-sailing day.

Thanks for sharing this with me.

Please take it easy there, like I always say.

All the best!

-Klein-

When do you think you need to take the bull by the horns?
 ==>
 There are many things to overcome when I am team leader.

>>There are many things to overcome when I am the team leader.
 When I have a difficult problem to solve it, I need to take the bull by the horns.

>>When I have a problem that is difficult to solve, I need to take the bull by the horns.
 Because if I hesitate about that, my team members become more difficult.
>>Because if I hesitate, my team members will suffer. 

So I talk many times with my team members and we are trying to find some solution about our problem.
>>So I talk with my team members many times when trying to find some solution about our problem. 

It is very difficult thing but, as you know, I am research engineer in our company, so finally we find the solution about our problem.
>>It is a very difficult thing but as you know, I am a research engineer in our company, so we could finally find the solution to our problem. 

After I solve that problem, I always feel that I did my best and It was good to take the bull by the horns.

>>After I solved that problem, I felt I did my best and it was good to take the bull by the horns.

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