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Hello, James!
I should say [이름] [이름]-A! lol
Did you take the bull by the horns today?
I hope not. I hope you didn\'t have to solve any problems and you had a smooth-sailing day.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Please take it easy there, like I always say.
All the best!
-Klein-
When do you think you need to take the bull by the horns?
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There are many things to overcome when I am team leader.
>>There are many things to overcome when I am the team leader.
When I have a difficult problem to solve it, I need to take the bull by the horns.
>>When I have a problem that is difficult to solve, I need to take the bull by the horns.
Because if I hesitate about that, my team members become more difficult.
>>Because if I hesitate, my team members will suffer.
So I talk many times with my team members and we are trying to find some solution about our problem.
>>So I talk with my team members many times when trying to find some solution about our problem.
It is very difficult thing but, as you know, I am research engineer in our company, so finally we find the solution about our problem.
>>It is a very difficult thing but as you know, I am a research engineer in our company, so we could finally find the solution to our problem.
After I solve that problem, I always feel that I did my best and It was good to take the bull by the horns.
>>After I solved that problem, I felt I did my best and it was good to take the bull by the horns.
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