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2018-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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If my friend steal something, at first, I will tell my friend to give it back to the owner. But if he or she doesn't give it back, I will tell the owner that my friend took it. It doesn't matter that the thief is my friend. One chance is enough to give the thing back. If she or he doesn't give it back, then that mean my friend isn't reliable. And I do not want a reliable friend.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I was really impressed with the quality of your sentences today.

I\'m also amazed with your principle.

You are truly a good person.

I\'m glad to have this chance to help you grow.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

If my friend steal something, at first, I will tell my friend to give it back to the owner.
>> If my friend steals something, I will immediately tell my friend to give it back to the owner.
But if he or she doesn\'t give it back, I will tell the owner that my friend took it.
>> Correct
It doesn\'t matter that the thief is my friend.
>> Correct
One chance is enough to give the thing back.
>> Correct
If she or he doesn\'t give it back, then that mean my friend isn\'t reliable.
>> If she or he doesn\'t give it back, then that means my friend isn\'t trustworthy.
And I do not want a reliable friend.

>> I do not want a dishonest friend.

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