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2018-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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HOMEWORK: Composition writing! Write an essay about your best friend. Where did you meet him / her? How did you become friends? My best friends are many.I met them in school and church.I was talk first to them.So, we can become friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

I am happy to see that you are submitting a longer essay now.

I still want to encourage you to write at least more than six sentences.

I hope you keep practicing your writing skills.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
Write an essay about your best friend. Where did you meet him / her? How did you become friends?

My best friends are many.

>>> OR: I have many best friends.

I met them in school and church.

>>> Correct!

I was talk first to them.So, we can become friends.

>>> I was the one who first talked with them. Then, we became friends.
>>> OR: I approached them first and we became friends.

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