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2018-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I never skip breakfast. Never. Breakfast is my power source, so if I skip it, I will be half dead befor the lunchtime begins. Even when I oversleep, I don't skip breakfast. If I don't have time to sit at the table and eat, I can eat something wile I walk to school. That way, I can always have breakfast.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I think your sentences are great.

You really have a flair for writing.

Keep it up!

Just be careful with your spelling and articles.

Take note of the suggestions below.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I never skip breakfast. Never.

>> Correct
Breakfast is my power source, so if I skip it, I will be half dead befor the lunchtime begins.
>> Breakfast is my power source, so if I skip it, I will be half dead before lunchtime begins.
Even when I oversleep, I don\'t skip breakfast.
>> Correct
If I don\'t have time to sit at the table and eat, I can eat something wile I walk to school.
>> Correct
That way, I can always have breakfast.

>> Correct

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