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2018-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What seems to enervate you these days? ==> As you know, my team locations are in two areas. One is in Seoul, and the other one is in Gumi. In Seoul office, there is a laboratory and 4 members work there. After changing our president, he ordered that the laboratory in Seoul has to be moved to Gumi. So I have to explain to my team members about that situation and they have to decide to go to Gumi or not. And I have to prepare how to move the laboratory to Gumi. We need much money to move the laboratory and we have to decide when is the moving day. That kind of things make me to enervate these days.

강사 첨삭

Take it easy there, James!

I think your colleagues are very sensible, so you don\'t encounter much problem talking with them.

Stay safe and sound!

-Klein-

What seems to enervate you these days?
 ==>
As you know, my team locations are in two areas. 

>>Correct

OR >> As you know are offices are in two locations.
One is in Seoul, and the other one is in Gumi.
>>Correct

In Seoul office, there is a laboratory and 4 members work there.
>>Correct

After changing our president, he ordered that the laboratory in Seoul has to be moved to Gumi.
>>Correct

So I have to explain to my team members about that situation and they have to decide to go to Gumi or not.
>>Correct

OR >>So I have to explain to my team members about that situation and they have to decide whether they will go to Gumi or not.

And I have to prepare how to move the laboratory to Gumi.
>>Correct

We need much money to move the laboratory and we have to decide when is the moving day.
>>Correct

That kind of things make me to enervate these days.

>>Those kinds of things enervate me these days.

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