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2018-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Well, no. I do not have friends over the internet. But maybe, I can make friends one day. I'm a member of many fan cafes, so I have many relations. And all the cafes that I affiliate has a member at my age. Also, some of the cafes has a meeting, and if I go there, I might have a chance to make friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Continue celebrating your talent in this language.

I know you can develop everyday.

I\'ll look forward to reading more of your work.

I\'ll talk to you tomorrow!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, no. I do not have friends over the internet.
>> Correct
But maybe, I can make friends one day.
>> Correct
I\'m a member of many fan cafes, so I have many relations.
>> I\'m a member of many fan sites, so I have many contacts.
And all the cafes that I affiliate has a member at my age.
>> And all the groups that I am affiliated with have members in my age.
Also, some of the cafes has a meeting, and if I go there, I might have a chance to make friends.

>> The groups also hold meetings and if I attend, it might be a good chance to make friends.

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