homework

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HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
In not more than ten sentences, write about your ideal house.

My ideal house is speacial. It has elevator for my tired leg.

>>> My ideal house is special. It has an elevator for my tired legs.                                                                                                                      

And, it has many bathoom with a bath,many bedroom with comfortable beds and,
it also has a game  room.

>>> And it has many bathrooms with bathtubs, many bedrooms with comfortable beds and a big game room.

And,it has all of the food that I wanted to
eat and, a quiet room for i can study with air conditioner.

>>> It also has all the food which I want to eat and a quiet  well-airconditioned room where I can study .

Sure,it must have library with many books.

>>> And of course, it has a library with many books.

And, it has other many things.

>>> My ideal house has everything.

So,I can do every thing what ever I want.

>>> So, I can do everything I want.

And, last it can fly very fast.

>>> And the last but the most important thing is it can fly.

So I can go anywhere I want to go.

>>> Correct!