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Hi Seong Won!
Please take note of the suggestions below.
Always be careful with your spelling.
I\'ll talk to you next week!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I\'m very, very happy when I read or watch <Harry Potter>, <The Maze Runner> serise.
>> I\'m very, very happy when I read or watch \"Harry Potter\" or \"The Maze Runner\" series.
And the other things I like to do is to see webtoons like <I Don\'t Want This Kind Of Hero> , <Along With The Gods>.
>> Another thing I like to do is to see webtoons like \"I Don\'t Want This Kind Of Hero\" and \"Along With The Gods\".
Both webtoons has exportationed to many countries.
>> Both web toons are being shown in many countries.
I also like eating pizza or chicken while wathing movies.
>> I also like eating pizza or chicken while watching movies.
It\'s a paradies while doing that.
>> It\'s like I\'m in paradise whenever I do that.
But talking with my friends are the best.
>> But talking with my friends is the best.
Oh, I\'m being very sorry for mr family.
>> I sometimes feel sorry for my family.
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