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2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I'm very, very happy when I read or watch <Harry Potter>, <The Maze Runner> serise. And the other things I like to do is to see webtoons like <I Don't Want This Kind Of Hero> , <Along With The Gods>. In Korean, they are called <이런 영웅은 싫어>, <신과 함께>. Both webtoons has exportationed to many countries. I also like eating pizza or chicken while wathing movies. It's a paradies while doing that. But talking with my friends are the best. Oh, I'm being very sorry for mr family.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Please take note of the suggestions below.

Always be careful with your spelling.

I\'ll talk to you next week!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I\'m very, very happy when I read or watch <Harry Potter>, <The Maze Runner> serise.
>> I\'m very, very happy when I read or watch \"Harry Potter\" or \"The Maze Runner\" series.
And the other things I like to do is to see webtoons like <I Don\'t Want This Kind Of Hero> , <Along With The Gods>. 
>> Another thing I like to do is to see webtoons like \"I Don\'t Want This Kind Of Hero\" and \"Along With The Gods\". 
Both webtoons has exportationed to many countries.
>> Both web toons are being shown in many countries.
I also like eating pizza or chicken while wathing movies.

>> I also like eating pizza or chicken while watching movies.
It\'s a paradies while doing that.

>> It\'s like I\'m in paradise whenever I do that.
But talking with my friends are the best.
>> But talking with my friends is the best.
Oh, I\'m being very sorry for mr family.

>> I sometimes feel sorry for my family.

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