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2018-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Whom do you feel enmity for? ==> In my case, I would like to maintain good relation with another team. So I try not to speak badly of other teams. But I feel enmity who talks badly about my team members. Because I am the team leader of my team, so I have to care my team members. If some members belong to another team tell us badly, I will try to find why they think so. The reason that they tell us badly is acceptable, I will try to change my team members working style. But if the reason doesn't make me understand, I will challenge them and I will get an apologize from them.

강사 첨삭

Way to go!

You are the best team leader ever, James! Thanks for being our inspiration. I said \"our\" because I would like to include your team members. I bet they look up to you.

Thanks for sharing this piece with me. I appreciate it whenever you find time for this activity.

Keep it up!

-Klein-

Whom do you feel enmity for?
 ==> 
In my case, I would like to maintain good relation with another team.

>>Correct
 So I try not to speak badly of other teams.

>>Correct
 But I feel enmity who talks badly about my team members.

>>Correct
 Because I am the team leader of my team, so I have to care my team members.

>>Because I am the team leader of my team, I have to take care of my team members.
 If some members belong to another team tell us badly, I will try to find why they think so.

>>If some members in another team talk about us badly, I will try to find out why they think so.
 The reason that they tell us badly is acceptable, I will try to change my team members working style.

>>If the reason they are talking about us badly was acceptable, I would try to change my team members\' working style.
 But if the reason doesn\'t make me understand, I will challenge them and I will get an apologize from them.

>>But if the reason is not sensible, I will challenge then and get them to apologize. 

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