Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Way to go!
You are the best team leader ever, James! Thanks for being our inspiration. I said \"our\" because I would like to include your team members. I bet they look up to you.
Thanks for sharing this piece with me. I appreciate it whenever you find time for this activity.
Keep it up!
-Klein-
Whom do you feel enmity for?
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In my case, I would like to maintain good relation with another team.
>>Correct
So I try not to speak badly of other teams.
>>Correct
But I feel enmity who talks badly about my team members.
>>Correct
Because I am the team leader of my team, so I have to care my team members.
>>Because I am the team leader of my team, I have to take care of my team members.
If some members belong to another team tell us badly, I will try to find why they think so.
>>If some members in another team talk about us badly, I will try to find out why they think so.
The reason that they tell us badly is acceptable, I will try to change my team members working style.
>>If the reason they are talking about us badly was acceptable, I would try to change my team members\' working style.
But if the reason doesn\'t make me understand, I will challenge them and I will get an apologize from them.
>>But if the reason is not sensible, I will challenge then and get them to apologize.
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