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2018-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When were you taken to the cleaners? ==> It is very difficult question to me. Until now, I am living normal life, so I don't remember when I was taken to the cleaners. I usually don't give up when I meet difficult problem in the company. But nowadays, I am taken to the cleaners because of my daughter. My daughter wants to watch TV all day when we are in together without my wife. At that time, I turn off the TV and I ask her to read books or to study mathematics, but my daughter turn on the TV and she watch TV what she wants. Although she doesn't agree with my opinion, she is my first daughter, so I cannot angry with her. She is only one person that I was taken to the cleaners.

강사 첨삭

Your daughter is the best!

She is truly adorable, James. When would I see her again? I really miss her!

No worries, I will wait patiently.

I hope you would have more time to spend together.

Thanks for sharing!

Please enjoy your afternoon!

-Klein-

When were you taken to the cleaners?
 ==>
It is very difficult question to me.

>>It is a very difficult question for me.
 Until now, I am living normal life, so I don\'t remember when I was taken to the cleaners.
>>Until now, I am living a normal life, so I don\'t remember when I was taken to the cleaners. 

I usually don\'t give up when I meet difficult problem in the company.
>>I usually don\'t given up when I meet a difficult problem in the company. 

But nowadays, I am taken to the cleaners because of my daughter.
>>Correct 

My daughter wants to watch TV all day when we are in together without my wife.
>>My daughter wants to watch TV all day when we are together without my wife. 

At that time, I turn off the TV and I ask her to read books or to study mathematics, but my daughter turn on the TV and she watch TV what she wants.
>>At that time, I turn off the TV and ask her to read books or study Mathematics, but my daughter turns on the TV and watches it as long as she wants. 

Although she doesn\'t agree with my opinion, she is my first daughter, so I cannot angry with her.
>>Although she doesn\'t agree to my opinion, she is my first daughter, so I cannot get angry with her.
She is only one person that I was taken to the cleaners.

>>She is the only person that takes me to the cleaners.

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