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2018-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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How do people greet each other in your country? Has it changed from the past? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. Our country's greet is bending a waist. And say each other 안녕하세요 or 반갑습니다. This way usually use adult. But the children doesn't bending awaist. They only said Hi or 보이루. The 보이루 is children greet. Because the famous Korea DJ make this greet. This greet is famous today to children.

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How do people greet each other in your country? Has it changed from the past? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
Our country\'s greet is bending a waist.

>> In our country, we bow to greet other people.
And say each other 안녕하세요 or 반갑습니다.

>> And say 안녕하세요 or 반갑습니다 to each other.
This way usually use adult.

>> We use these greetings for adults.
But the children doesn\'t bending awaist.

>> But to children, we don\'t bow to them.
They only said Hi or 보이루.

>> We only say hi or 보이루 to them.
The 보이루 is children greet.

>> 보이루 is a greeting for children.
Because the famous Korea DJ make this greet.

>> Because a famous Korean DJ started it.
This greet is famous today to children.

>> This greeting is famous to children.

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