Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
You are such a sweet kid.
You should keep writing letters to your mom.
I bet she would love that.
Thank you for sharing for today.
I\'ll call you tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, sometimes I forget my mom\'s birthday, but when it is really her birthday, I check my calender and prepare her present.
>> Well, sometimes I forget my mom\'s birthday, but when it is really her birthday, I check my calendar and prepare a present for her.
Mostly, her present is her fevorite snacks.
>> Most of the time, I give her favorite snacks as a present.
At the past, me and my sister used to write letters to mom.
>> In the past, my sister and I used to write letters to my mom.
But nowadays, we just give her a present with just congratulation words.
>> But nowadays, we just greet her and give her a present.
And it\'s same to all the mambers of the family.
>> And it\'s the same for all the mambers of the family.
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