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2018-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Well, sometimes I forget my mom's birthday, but when it is really her birthday, I check my calender and prepare her present. Mostly, her present is her fevorite snacks. At the past, me and my sister used to write letters to mom. But nowadays, we just give her a present with just congratulation words. And it's same to all the mambers of the family.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

You are such a sweet kid.

You should keep writing letters to your mom.

I bet she would love that.

Thank you for sharing for today.

I\'ll call you tomorrow!

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, sometimes I forget my mom\'s birthday, but when it is really her birthday, I check my calender and prepare her present.
>> Well, sometimes I forget my mom\'s birthday, but when it is really her birthday, I check my calendar and prepare a present for her.
Mostly, her present is her fevorite snacks.
>> Most of the time, I give her favorite snacks as a present.
At the past, me and my sister used to write letters to mom.
>> In the past, my sister and I used to write letters to my mom.
But nowadays, we just give her a present with just congratulation words.
>> But nowadays, we just greet her and give her a present.
And it\'s same to all the mambers of the family.

>> And it\'s the same for all the mambers of the family.

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