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강사 첨삭
Thank you!
You have shared another wonderful piece of yours with me.
How are you feeling at this hour?
Cheer up! It\'s Wednesday! Tomorrow is Thursday, my friend.
Oh, I wish I could see cherry blossoms in person, too. Well, that could wait. I would share my experience with you by that time.
Again, please enjoy your day, James!
Have a good one!
-Klein-
What do you have in store for APRIL?
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In Spring, there are many good sighting places in Korea.
>>In spring, there are many good sites in Korea.
Many flowers begin to bloom in April.
>>Correct
Especially, JINHAE is famous place for cherry blossom.
>>Especially, Jinhae is a famous place for cherry blossoms.
So many people go there when the cherry blossom festival begins in April 1st.
>>So many people go there when the cherry blossom festival begins on April 1st.
In my case, I don\'t like go there because JINHAE is very crowded at that time.
>>In my case, I don\'t like going there because Jinhae is very crowded at that time.
So I just see the cherry blossom in the KUMHO mountain in place of JINHAE.
>>Correct
In April, I will make time and I will go good place with my family.
>>In April, I will make time to go to a good place with my family.
And I started the health care in the gym for my health.
>>Correct
Nowadays my weight is increasing, so I have to care my body.
>>Nowadays, my weight is increasing, so I have to take care of my body.
I will exercise hard for my family.
>>Correct
It is my plan for this month.
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