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2018-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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What do you have in store for APRIL? ==> In Spring, there are many good sighting places in Korea. Many flowers begin to bloom in April. Especially, JINHAE is famous place for cherry blossom. So many people go there when the cherry blossom festival begins in April 1st. In my case, I don't like go there because JINHAE is very crowded at that time. So I just see the cherry blossom in the KUMHO mountain in place of JINHAE. In April, I will make time and I will go good place with my family. And I started the health care in the gym for my health. Nowadays my weight is increasing, so I have to care my body. I will exercise hard for my family. It is my plan for this month.

강사 첨삭

Thank you!

You have shared another wonderful piece of yours with me.

How are you feeling at this hour?

Cheer up! It\'s Wednesday! Tomorrow is Thursday, my friend.

Oh, I wish I could see cherry blossoms in person, too. Well, that could wait. I would share my experience with you by that time.

Again, please enjoy your day, James!

Have a good one!

-Klein-

What do you have in store for APRIL?
 ==> 
In Spring, there are many good sighting places in Korea.
>>In spring, there are many good sites in Korea.

Many flowers begin to bloom in April.

>>Correct
 Especially, JINHAE is famous place for cherry blossom.    

>>Especially, Jinhae is a famous place for cherry blossoms.

So many people go there when the cherry blossom festival begins in April 1st.
>>So many people go there when the cherry blossom festival begins on April 1st.

In my case, I don\'t like go there because JINHAE is very crowded at that time.
>>In my case, I don\'t like going there because Jinhae is very crowded at that time. 

So I just see the cherry blossom in the KUMHO mountain in place of JINHAE.
>>Correct 

In April, I will make time and I will go good place with my family.
>>In April, I will make time to go to a good place with my family.
And I started the health care in the gym for my health.

>>Correct
 Nowadays my weight is increasing, so I have to care my body.
>>Nowadays, my weight is increasing, so I have to take care of my body.

I will exercise hard for my family.
>>Correct
It is my plan for this month.

>>Correct

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