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2018-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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My important item are money and cellphone. Cellphone is the most important thimg because without it, I can't call to someone if I get lost. I'm very good at loseing my way. The money is very important item too. It will be a disaster if I don't have anything to buy with.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Good job in picking your items.

I agree with the ones you chose.

You have explained your reasons well.

Keep it up!

~~ Teacher Sharon

My important item are money and cellphone.

>> The important items for me are money and cellphone.
Cellphone is the most important thimg because without it, I can\'t call to someone if I get lost.
>> Cellphone is the most important thing because without it, I can\'t call someone if I get lost.
I\'m very good at loseing my way.
>> I\'m very prone to getting lost.
The money is very important item too.
>> Money is very important,too.
It will be a disaster if I don\'t have anything to buy with.

>> Correct

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