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2018-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I make friends with common interests. Without comon interests, it is very hard to make new friends. First, if I succeed to say hello, I ask he or she's interests. And if our interests are same, we talk about it very long time. At the end, we become friends. It's true

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I see that you make new friends really well.

You are such a sweet kid.

I enjoyed your composition.

Keep writing!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I make friends with common interests.
>> I make friends with people who have the same interests as mine.
Without comon interests, it is very hard to make new friends.
>> Without any common interests, it is very hard to make new friends.
First, if I succeed to say hello, I ask he or she\'s interests.
>> First, if I succeed in saying \"Hello\", I will ask about his or her interests.
And if our interests are same, we talk about it very long time.
>> And if our interests are the same, we will talk about them for a very long time.
At the end, we become friends.
>> In the end, we become friends.
It\'s true

>> It\'s true.

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