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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I see that you make new friends really well.
You are such a sweet kid.
I enjoyed your composition.
Keep writing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I make friends with common interests.
>> I make friends with people who have the same interests as mine.
Without comon interests, it is very hard to make new friends.
>> Without any common interests, it is very hard to make new friends.
First, if I succeed to say hello, I ask he or she\'s interests.
>> First, if I succeed in saying \"Hello\", I will ask about his or her interests.
And if our interests are same, we talk about it very long time.
>> And if our interests are the same, we will talk about them for a very long time.
At the end, we become friends.
>> In the end, we become friends.
It\'s true
>> It\'s true.
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