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How would you define \"age\"?
How would you describe your age?
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 Generally, age means the years of life from birth.

>>Correct
 In Korea, when I was born in, I became one year old.

>>In Korea, when one is born, we\'re automatically 1 year old.
 Western case, after one year when I was born in, I became one year old.

>>In Western\'s case, after one year, when we\'re born, we only turn 1 year old after a year.
 Because of culture difference, although someone born in same day, the age is different.
>>Because of culture difference, although some are born on the same day, their ages are different.
I think the age is just number.

>>I think age is just a number.
 As you know, I am older and older and my age is over 50 in oriental age.

>>As you know, I get older and older, so my age is over 50 in oriental age.
 But I try to live happily.

>>Correct
 Nowadays the lifespan is increasing so I have to care my body and mental health.

>>Nowadays, the lifespan is increasing, so I have to take care of my body and mental health.
 So I am trying to care my health for a long life.

>>So I am trying to take care of my health for a long life.