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HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
Write about a time that you failed at something. How did that failure affect?
When, I was third grade, I was ran for class president,but failed.
So, I felt I should do better to my friends.
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~Teacher Shanee^^,
HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
Write about a time that you failed at something. How did that failure affect?
When, I was third grade, I was ran for class president,but failed.
>>> When I was a third grader, I ran for class president but failed.
>>> OR: When I was in third grade, I ran for class president but failed.
So, I felt I should do better to my friends.
>>> OR: So, I should treat my friends better.
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