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2018-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I never tried on the diet. Well, these days, I'm feeling the needs of the diet, but I never tried it. If I start to do diet, I can't eat a food that I want to eat. Also, I can' t find the time to exercise. These days, my life is very busy. When I finish all the things that I have to do, it's aready 11 a.m. Even in weekends, I have to study that I couldn't do at weekday. But seeing my self, I need to diet.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

You did a good job on your compositions this week.

I hope you keep this up next week!

Please review the new expressions I included below.

Have a great weekend!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I never tried on the diet.

>> I have never tried to go on a diet.
Well, these days, I\'m feeling the needs of the diet, but I never tried it.
>> Well, these days, I feel that I need to go on a diet but I never started it.
If I start to do diet, I can\'t eat a food that I want to eat.
>> If I go on a diet, I won\'t be able to eat the food that I want to eat.
Also, I can\' t find the time to exercise.
>> Correct
These days, my life is very busy.
>> These days, my life has been very busy.
When I finish all the things that I have to do, it\'s aready 11 a.m.
>> I finish all the things that I have to do until 11 p.m.
Even in weekends, I have to study that I couldn\'t do at weekday.
>> Even on weekends, I have to study what I couldn\'t during weekdays.
But seeing my self, I need to diet.

>> But when I look at myself, I really need to go on a diet.

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