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In case of my daughter, she doesn\'t like English subject but she likes Math.
However. all high schools students can\'t choose to like subjects .
In my opinion, it is wrong.
In my country has to change education system.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
I think there\'s no perfect educational system in the world but I think my country and your country\'s educational system need a big change.(\",)
~T. Lynn
In case of my daughter, she doesn\'t like English subject but she likes Math.
>> correct!
However. all high schools students can\'t choose to like subjects .
>> However, all school students must learn all subjects. They can\'t choose what subjects to study.
In my opinion, it is wrong.
>> correct!
In my country has to change education system.
>>The education system in my country must change.
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