homework
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I also hope that our government can find ways to eradicate poverty so everybody can be happy. Have a good day!
How would the world be different if there was no poverty? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
No proverty will be not have a poor.
>> There would be no poor people if poverty is addressed.
Everyone is rich so people is so happy.
>> Everyone is rich so all people are happy.
And,in the city,there are no the gap between rich and poor.
>> And in the city, there is no gap between the rich and the poor.
So, all people are happy.
>> Correct.
I want to the would has no proverty.
>> I hope that there is no poverty.
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