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2018-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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My country can get a medical check-up once a month for all of people. That\'s like a duty. We are getting it before joining a company, taking an promotion exam and physical test. If someone don\'t get it they never get medical welfare lots. Anyway, it finally started nice on a Monday. I hope you are doing well everything. Have a great day.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir Will!

I\'m glad that you\'re back on my composition board! Yes, I am having an exuberant day thanks to you. ha! ha! ha! Have a smooth sailing day!

~ Teacher Eunice


My country can get a medical check-up once a month for all of people.

>>> My country can provide a free medical check-up once a month for all the citizens.

>>> OR: Our government can provide an extensive health care for all the citizens in our country. 

That\'s like a duty.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: It is a responsibility.

We are getting it before joining a company, taking an promotion exam and physical test.

>>> We can take a promotion exam and a physical test before joining a company. 

If someone don\'t get it they never get medical welfare lots.

>>> If someone doesn\'t get it then he will never get a medical welfare.

Anyway, it finally started nice on a Monday.

>>> Anyway, I finally started Monday right.  

I hope you are doing well everything.

>>>  I hope you are doing well in everything.

Have a great day.

>>> Correct!

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