Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir Will!
I\'m glad that you\'re back on my composition board! Yes, I am having an exuberant day thanks to you. ha! ha! ha! Have a smooth sailing day!
~ Teacher Eunice
My country can get a medical check-up once a month for all of people.
>>> My country can provide a free medical check-up once a month for all the citizens.
>>> OR: Our government can provide an extensive health care for all the citizens in our country.
That\'s like a duty.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: It is a responsibility.
We are getting it before joining a company, taking an promotion exam and physical test.
>>> We can take a promotion exam and a physical test before joining a company.
If someone don\'t get it they never get medical welfare lots.
>>> If someone doesn\'t get it then he will never get a medical welfare.
Anyway, it finally started nice on a Monday.
>>> Anyway, I finally started Monday right.
I hope you are doing well everything.
>>> I hope you are doing well in everything.
Have a great day.
>>> Correct!
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