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This is marvelous!
Your creative faculty has been turned on, James.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of yours. You sure got a different perspective! And I love it!
I wonder how you would like to color your Tuesday. lol Tell me about it on our next scheduled chat. Until then!
-Klein-
How would you like to color your Monday?
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I would like to color white my Monday. Because it is a first day of week.
>>I would like to color my Monday white, because it is the first day of the week.
That means it starts a new week.
>>Correct
OR >> That means it\'s the start of a new week.
I focus on the meaning of new.
>>Correct
New start of the week, I think it is very similar with painting.
>>A new start of the week, I think, is very similar with painting.
When we draw a picture, we use a white drawing paper.
>>Correct
We draw sketches on the paper and color it.
>>Correct
So I think Monday is similar with a white drawing paper.
>>So I think Monday is similar to a white drawing paper.
There will be much exciting things like problems on Monday and I will try to solve it.
>>There will be much exciting thing like problems on Monday, and I will try to solve them.
Draw a line on the drawing paper means that I begin to find solutions about it.
>>Drawing a line on the drawing paper means beginning to find solutions.
Because of that, I would like to color white on Monday.
>>Because of that, I would like to color my Monday white.
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