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When I am on a diet I worried about the contents and calrolies. However, I usually dont care about them except in that case.
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I think it is okay to eat all kinds of food but, you should take precaution first when eating it and don\'t eat too much of it if you know that the contents of that food is bad for you.
When I am on a diet I worried about the contents and calrolies. However, I usually dont care about them except in that case.
>> When I am on a diet, I am worried about the contents and calories of the food. However, I usually don\'t care about it except for that.
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