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Good morning JoeongAh! Yes, learning English is very important nowadays. People, all around the world, like to travel and we use the English language to communicate. So I think we need to really learn it.
Why learning English is important is there are two reasones. Thr first reason is we can comunicate and share our opinion with foreigner by using English. The second reason is it helps to converse with locals when traveling.
>> There are two reasons why learning English is important. The first reason is, we can use it to communicate and share our opinion with foreigners. The second reason is, it helps us to converse with locals when traveling.
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