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2018-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Writing task: Have modern advancements truly improved the quality of people's lives? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. Yes,it is. People can live their life comfortablely. So,I am happy to this mordern advancements. And it was help to improve our country's economic. So,the mordern advancements improved the quality of people.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for your ideas. At such a young age, you are already aware of a lot of issues. Good job!

Writing task: Have modern advancements truly improved the quality of people\'s lives? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
Yes,it is.

>> Yes, it has.
People can live their life comfortablely.

>> People can live their life comfortably.
So,I am happy to this mordern advancements.

>> So,I am happy with all the modern advancements.
And it was help to improve our country\'s economic.

>> And they help improve our country\'s economy.
So,the mordern advancements improved the quality of people.

>> So, modern advancements improved the quality of people\'s lives.

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