homework
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HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
In not more than ten sentences, write the factors which you think contribute to a good movie.
I think action,thril,friendship and many other things are important.
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I appreciate your effort in doing your homework [이름]!
Please continue to improve your writing skills. Good job!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
In not more than ten sentences, write the factors which you think contribute to a good movie.
I think action,thril,friendship and many other things are important.
>>> I think the acting of characters, the plot, the lessons which can be learned and many other are important.
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