Homework 7th, Jan, 2022

2022-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

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If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be? Why? >> There really is one thing that I want to change about myself. I want to do someting I want to do, with PERSISTANCY. Looking back, I\'ve given up too easily whenever I was faced with difficulties, obstacles and fears of failure. But I know that without these things, no one can succeed. The problem is that even though I know the way to succeess, it\'s easy to see myself not thinking and not acting as I already know. I, therefore, now, declare that this year of 2022, exactly speaking, at least by Dec. 31, 2022, I will continue my English talking class with you no matter what happens, no matter what obstacles I woud face. •My goal in 2022 : Level 7->Level 10!!! ** I\'m struggling with my headach until now TT. But it\'s a perfect timing for me to write because no one wakes up excepting for me. When my daughter wake up, especially, the chaos begins.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday, U [이름]!

That sounds really motivating! I hope you\'d be able to achieve that goal of yours. Keep motivating yourself and Keep on being persistent! You can do it! ^^

Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful weekend!

* I hope you are feeling better today!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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1. There really is one thing that I want to change about myself.
>>Correct!
2. I want to do someting I want to do, with PERSISTANCY.
>> I want to do something with PERSISTENCY.
3. Looking back, I\'ve given up too easily whenever I was faced with difficulties, obstacles and fears of failure.
>> Correct! 
4. But I know that without these things, no one can succeed. 
>> Correct! 
5. The problem is that even though I know the way to succeess, it\'s easy to see myself not thinking and not acting as I already know.
>> The problem is that even though I know the way to success, it\'s easy to see myself not thinking and not acting as I already know.
6. I, therefore, now, declare that this year of 2022, exactly speaking, at least by Dec. 31, 2022, I will continue my English talking class with you no matter what happens, no matter what obstacles I woud face. My goal in 2022 : Level 7->Level 10!!!
>> I, therefore, now, declare that this year of 2022, exactly speaking, at least by Dec. 31, 2022, I will continue my English talking class with you no matter what happens, no matter what obstacles I would face.  My goal in 2022 : from Level 7 to Level 10!!!

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