HOMEWORK~!! 8-
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1.
There are the historical places in Korea.
Among them, I think the most famous historical places for tourists are Imjingak Peace Nuri Park and Seodaemun Prison History Museum
You can see North Korea and traces of the Korean War in Imjingak Peace Nuri Park.
When Korea was a colony from Japan, many fighters for independence were killed by Japanese army in Seodaemun Prison.
So you can see torture tools and narrow prisons
Foreigners of interested in Korea history like to go to those places.
2.
When I was a student, I always went to museums with students on school picnics.
These are one of the course on school picnics.
I didn\'t understand people why liked to see museums when I was a student.
But I have been to Jeju island alone.
So I have visited museums during I was travailing because I had a lot of time.
I didn\'t know when I was a student, the museum is very quiet and has many interesting things.
So now, I like to going to any museums.
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Thank you An!
~Lucy
There are the historical places in Korea.
>>There are historical places in Korea.
Among them, I think the most famous historical places for tourists are Imjingak Peace Nuri Park and Seodaemun Prison History Museum
Among them, I think the most famous historical places for tourists are Imjingak Peace Nuri Park and Seodaemun Prison History Museum
>>CORRECT!
You can see North Korea and traces of the Korean War in Imjingak Peace Nuri Park.
You can see North Korea and traces of the Korean War in Imjingak Peace Nuri Park.
>>CORRECT!
When Korea was a colony from Japan, many fighters for independence were killed by Japanese army in Seodaemun Prison.
When Korea was a colony from Japan, many fighters for independence were killed by Japanese army in Seodaemun Prison.
>>When Korea was a colony of Japan, many fighters for independence were killed by Japanese army in Seodaemun Prison.
So you can see torture tools and narrow prisons
>>CORRECT!
Foreigners of interested in Korea history like to go to those places.
Foreigners of interested in Korea history like to go to those places.
>>Foreigners who are interested in Korea\'s history like to go to those places.
When I was a student, I always went to museums with students on school picnics.>>CORRECT!
These are one of the course on school picnics.
These are one of the course on school picnics.
>>CORRECT!
I didn\'t understand people why liked to see museums when I was a student.
I didn\'t understand people why liked to see museums when I was a student.
>>I didn\'t understand people who liked to see museums when I was a student.
But I have been to Jeju island alone.
>>CORRECT!
So I have visited museums during I was travailing because I had a lot of time.
So I have visited museums during I was travailing because I had a lot of time.
>>So I have visited museums when I was travailing because I had a lot of time.
I didn\'t know when I was a student, the museum is very quiet and has many interesting things.
>>CORRECT!
So now, I like to going to any museums.
So now, I like to going to any museums.
>>So now, I like to go to any museums.
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