Homework 8.11
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you like best about moving to a new house?
: I like our living room is bigger t[이름] previous home. I can watch TV more conveniently in living room. Also, the view that I can see in my varenda is so good. I like to watch the sky so this is so great thing for me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Michelle! ^^
T[이름]k you so much for doing your homework.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I like our living room is bigger t[이름] previous home.
>> I like our living room now which is bigger t[이름] the previous home.
I can watch TV more conveniently in living room.
>> Now, I can watch TV more conveniently in the living room.
Also, the view that I can see in my varenda is so good.
>> Also, the view that I can see on my veranda is so good.
I like to watch the sky so this is so great thing for me.
>> CORRECT!
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