Homework 8

2023-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lyn

학생이 쓴 원문

Why do most students like reading and some don\'t? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences. Some students who like reading books have a habit to reading books from early age. So, they read books naturally and feel happy by reading books. But, other students who don\'t like reading books don\'t have a habit to reading books. So, they can\'t read books easily and feel stress if they see a letter of books. They have to start reading books with picture or easy letter habitually.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Ku [이름]! Books are important for the mind, heart, and soul. Reading is a truly captivating experience that inspires creativity and changes lives. Some children develop reading habits from a young age while others have different hobbies. These good reading habits can be eventually developed. Always take good care of yourself. Stay warm and safe!~T. Lyn
Some students who like reading books have a habit to reading books from early age.
>>Some student who enjoy reading have a habit of reading from a young age.
So, they read books naturally and feel happy by reading books.
>>So, they naturally read books and feel happy while reading them.
But, other students who don\'t like reading books don\'t have a habit to reading books.
>>However, other student who don\'t like reading don\'t have the habit if reading books.
So, they can\'t read books easily and feel stress if they see a letter of books.
>>That\'s why they can\'t read books easily and feel stressed when look at the letter in books.
They have to start reading books with picture or easy letter habitually.
>>Young children should start habitually reading books with pictures or easy letters.

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