Homework(8/2): Somthings that sets me apart
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Great day, Oh!!!
The most important thing is trying your best. I know your can really learn from our daily activities. Be confident in speaking English because you can see yourself speaking the language well in days to come.
Have a great day~~~
Talk to you tomorrow and always be positive.
T. Jeny
Dear sam.
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i do my homework in a long time.
>>I haven\'t done my homework for a long time.
i started 2 project since last week.
>>I\'ve started 2 projects since last week.
i was very busy yesterday so that i couldn\'t my homework.
>>I was very busy yesterday so I couldn\'t do my homework.
Today is Tuesday. i can read your correction and comments now.
>>It\'s Tuesday and I\'ve just read your corrections and comments.
Thanks for your advice that i have to speak loudly and clearly.
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I know that, but i don\'t have confidence yet. haha
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See you tomorrow.
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There are some things that sets me apart.
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i have a positive thought though sometimes there are a difficult situations.
>>I have a positive mind though sometimes there are difficult situations.
and I have a soft laugh and gentle smile.so the people who meet me first have a good impression on me.
I always smile well.
>>I always smile as well.
I also have a powerful driving force on both business and private.
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OR>>I also have a powerful driving force on both business and private matters.
Finally i also have passion to learn new things such as learning English, playing guitar and so on. you know that well.
>>Finally, I also have the passion to learn new things such as learning English, playing guitar and so on.
you know that well.
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