HomeWork#8
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강사 첨삭
Hello!
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about the questions that I posted.
To tell you honestly, I am more than happy to study with you!
Have a good afternoon!
_T.Jeny^^
Topic: Advertising
1. Is
advertising a good or bad thing?
- In my opinion, advertising is good thing
for people.
>> In my opinion, advertising is good for people.
First, Advertising offers people who watching
the TV or listening the radio information of product.
>> First, advertising offers those who watch the TV or listen to the radio information about a certain product.
And then, people who need the product would buy that.
>> Correct!
Second, Advertising help people
to compare A and B product, and people can choose what they really want.
>> Second, advertising help people to compare product A with product B; and people can choose what they really want.
2. What factors are essential in
making a good advertisement?
- I think honest information about the
advertised thing is the most important factor of advertisement.
>> Correct!
If there is a false
advertisement, buyers cannot consume what they want to buy.
>> Correct!
3. Do you think you are easily persuaded to buy
things after seeing or hearing an ad?
- No! I\'m not easily persuaded by the
advertisement.
>> Correct!
When I want to buy, I check out all
information, price, quality, etc about that product.
>> When I want to buy something, I check out all the information about that product that include its price, quality, etc.
I cannot write long sentences today due to lack
of the space.
>> I cannot write ling sentences today due to lack of space.
I\'m really happy to study with
you^^
>> Correct!
See you!
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