Homework(8/22): cloning dinosaurs
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Hi Oh,
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T. Jeny
Dear sam.
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I was happy to hear your voice for a long time.
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I was very busy due to performing 3 projects.
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According to our metodology of IT projects that we must comply with, There are many steps includig analysis, design, development, unit test, UAT(user acceptance test), deploy, go-live and stabilizing.
>>According to our methodology of IT projects that we must comply with, there are many steps including analysis, design, development, unit test, UAT(user acceptance test), deploy, go-live and stabilization.
Anaysys of client\'s requirement was finished and next step, designing was also finished and next step, developing IT program was also completed, and next step, unit test (testing by programmer selfish) was also successful.
>>The analysis of client\'s requirements, design, development of the IT program and unit test were all successful.
Remaining steps till this month are from UAT and go-live.
>>The remaining steps till this month are from UAT and go-live.
These steps depend on user, i.e, the result of UAT.
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Even If we could clone dinosaurs like Jurassic Park, I don\'t want to be clone like that.
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They could live at that time, but finally they died out millions of years ago.
>>They lived at that time but finally they all died millions of years ago.
i know the reason they could not survive at new echo system.
>>I know the reason why they couldn\'t survive at the echo system.
if we clone dinosaurs now, i don\'t know where to live, how to live in current circumstance and why to clone them.
>>If we clone dinosaurs now, I don\'t know where to live, how to live in current circumstance and why clone them.
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