HOMEWORK 8/24, ESSAY
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Time is really very fast these days. We just have to take it easy and do things in the right path.
Growing and developing yourself,it could be as simple as learning one new thing a day, so take one step at a time.
T. Jeny
Dear [Name].
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I am verry sorry for late writie writing.
>>I am sorry to write late.
Children who start reading earlier in life, perform better on in their school studies. Do you agree?
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This title is interpreted in two ways.
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1st is the child who can read at a young age.
>>First, if the child can read at an early age.
2nd is would be have habit of reading book.
>>Second, if the child has a habit of reading.
I choice 2nd way.
>>I chose the second one.
the habit of reading book at younger age has many advantage as below.
>>The habit of reading a book at a young age has many advantages.
- It will have a rich imagination.
>>It can enrich his imagination.
- It will can take the free-thinking.
>>It can broaden his way of thinking.
- It wil can learn itself the fact that others do not teach.
>>It can help him learn by himself.
- It will could allow an objective thought for any issue.
>>It can help him be objective about a certain issue.
- There are many another advantages don\'t mentioned above.
>>There are other advantages that I haven\'t mentioned.
For example in my case,
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My son graduated from Seoul National University.(SNU)
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You know SNU is the best university it can go 0.1% only in Korea.
>>You know, SNU is the best university in Korea and only 0.1% Koreans can go and enter in this school.
It\'s wright.
>>It\'s right.
whenevr many persons meet me, they ask me \"How to let your son study?\".
>>Whenever I meet my friends, they ask me, \"How did you help your son study?\"
I respond to them always the same.
>>I say the same thing over and over again.
\"They let their son/daughter read book always.
>>\"They always let their children read books.
and He/She will can learn themselves.\"
>>Then, they can learn on their own.
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