HOMEWORK 8/24, ESSAY
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
first of all, I am sorry for changing the title of homework.
That is the reason that today's title is same the title of a few days ago.
and As the teaching of today, I hope to write my diary .
I got up at 6:20.
I had to prepare english lesson earlier than normal.
Because I drank alcohol yesterday, I was afraid I could not review and prepare my lesson.
I took a phone english class from 6:50 to 7 o'clock for 10 minutes.
after that lesson, I soon went to work in the company.
it takes a one and half an hour via bus and subway.
I usually take the bus , No.1082 and get off in front of Dnagsan subway station.
and transit to subway line no.9 and get off YOIDO staton and walk up to the company by an underground passage.
I hosted a weekly meeting as leader at 10 o'clock.
The meeting originally had to do yesterday, a member of team was absent because of his illness.
So it was forced to host the meeting today.
The meeting took a 30 minutes.
if not special,I always do that.
강사 첨삭
Hi Oh!!!!
Thank you for talking about your schedule. Nice job!!!!
We all make mistakes but the best thing about is that we can learn from it and not do the same thing.
We just have to admit our mistakes and change it for the better.
Have a great day!!!
T. Jeny
>>correct
first of all, I am sorry for changing the title of homework.
first of all, I am sorry for changing the title of homework.
>>First of all, I am sorry for changing the title of the homework.
That is the reason that today\'s title is same the title of a few days ago.
That is the reason that today\'s title is same the title of a few days ago.
>>That is the reason why today\'s title is the same a few days ago.
and As the teaching of today, I hope to write my diary .
>>As for today\'s lesson, I hope to write my diary.
I got up at 6:20.
and As the teaching of today, I hope to write my diary .
>>As for today\'s lesson, I hope to write my diary.
I got up at 6:20.
>>correct
I had to prepare english lesson earlier than normal.
I had to prepare english lesson earlier than normal.
>>I had to prepare for my English lessons earlier than the normal time.
Because I drank alcohol yesterday, I was afraid I could not review and prepare my lesson.
>>I was afraid, I couldn\'t review and prepare my lessons because I drank alcohol yesterday.
I took a phone english class from 6:50 to 7 o\'clock for 10 minutes.
Because I drank alcohol yesterday, I was afraid I could not review and prepare my lesson.
>>I was afraid, I couldn\'t review and prepare my lessons because I drank alcohol yesterday.
I took a phone english class from 6:50 to 7 o\'clock for 10 minutes.
>>I took a phone English class from 6:50 to 7:00 a.m. for 10 minutes.
after that lesson, I soon went to work in the company.
>>After having a class, I immediately go to work.
it takes a one and half an hour via bus and subway.
after that lesson, I soon went to work in the company.
>>After having a class, I immediately go to work.
it takes a one and half an hour via bus and subway.
>>It take an hour and a half by bus and subway.
I usually take the bus , No.1082 and get off in front of Dnagsan subway station.
I usually take the bus , No.1082 and get off in front of Dnagsan subway station.
>>I usually take the bus, no.1082 and get off in front of the Dnagsan subway station.
and transit to subway line no.9 and get off YOIDO staton and walk up to the company by an underground passage.
>>I transit to subway line no.9 then get off at Yoido station and walk up to the company using the underground passage.
I hosted a weekly meeting as leader at 10 o\'clock.
and transit to subway line no.9 and get off YOIDO staton and walk up to the company by an underground passage.
>>I transit to subway line no.9 then get off at Yoido station and walk up to the company using the underground passage.
I hosted a weekly meeting as leader at 10 o\'clock.
>>As a leader, I host a weekly meeting at 10 o\'clock.
The meeting originally had to do yesterday, a member of team was absent because of his illness.
The meeting originally had to do yesterday, a member of team was absent because of his illness.
>>Originally, it is scheduled on Wednesdays but a member of the team was absent because he was sick.
So it was forced to host the meeting today.
So it was forced to host the meeting today.
>>So, I was forced to host the meeting today.
The meeting took a 30 minutes.
The meeting took a 30 minutes.
>>The meeting lasted for 30 minutes.
if not special,I always do that.
if not special,I always do that.
>>If there is nothing special, this is always my daily routine.
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