homework 8.27

2020-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Melody

학생이 쓴 원문

1. open - Could you open my can? I hurted my finger. 2. offer - Water and necessity are offered by right there. 3. organize - Irene likes to organize party. This party is organized by Irene too. 4. own - I always wanted to have my own computer. 5. offend - We will really offend if you don\'t come group project meeting again.

강사 첨삭

1. Could you open my can? 
>>CORRECT
OR>>Could you open it for me?

2. I hurted my finger.
>>I hurt my finger.

3. Water and necessity are offered by right there.
>>Water and necessity are being offered right there.

4. Irene likes to organize party. 
>>Irene likes to organize a party. 

5. This party is organized by Irene too.
>>This party is organized by Irene, too.

6. I always wanted to have my own computer.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I have always really wanted to have a computer.

7. We will really offend if you don\'t come group project meeting again.
>>We will be really offended, if you don\'t come to our group project meeting again.

Good job, Michelle!

- T. Melody ^^

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