Homework(8/29): Present and past participles

2016-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear sam. I was happy to take a lesson today. I think it was good choice to take a lesson in the midst of busy 3 projects. Therefore I could learn and learn more grammar,pronunciation and listening your voice and so on. It was my pleasure to talking to you today! Thanks for your many questions and waiting my response. on the way of my going out to work, i heard the recorded mp3 file. i felt that i am still poor at my English skills in all parts such as listening, speaking and grammar. But, without disappointing, i will continue learning. haha. I will See you the day after tomorrow. bye sam. = body = 1. I am not interested in politics. 2. The speaker bored his audience with his vulgar jokes. 3. She was feeling sleepy because she was bored. 4. A boring writer makes bored readers. 5. He is a well-reading person.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your time, Oh!!!

I know with your busy schedule, it\'s hard for you to find time. But thank you very much. Oh!!!

I appreciate all the effort!!!

T. Jeny

 

Dear sam.

>>correct
I was happy to take a lesson today.

>>correct
I think it was good choice to take a lesson in the midst of busy 3 projects.

>>correct
Therefore I could learn and learn more grammar,pronunciation and listening your voice and so on.
>>Therefore I could learn and learn more about grammar and pronunciation just 
listening to your voice and so on.
It was my pleasure to talking to you today!

>>It was my pleasure to talk to you today!
Thanks for your many questions and waiting my response.

>>Thanks for your questions and waiting for my response.
on the way of my going out to work, i heard the recorded mp3 file.

>>On my way to work, I heard the recorded mp3 file.
i felt that i am still poor at my English skills in all parts such as listening, speaking and grammar.

>>correct
But, without disappointing, i will continue learning. haha.
>>But I won\'t be disappointed, I will still continue learning. haha.
I will See you the day after tomorrow. bye sam.
>>correct
= body =
1. I am not interested in politics.

>>correct
2. The speaker bored his audience with his vulgar jokes.

>>correct
3. She was feeling sleepy because she was bored.

>>correct
4. A boring writer makes bored readers.

>>correct
5. He is a well-reading person.

>>correct

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·